CONCORD, N. H.
Nov. 18.
Dear
one
Have only time to say, Please make any change of yours manifest by interrogation on margin in pencil. Do not trouble yourself or me with notes.* Then I will look at the spot indicated, and adopt or otherwise.
With deep love mother
M. B. Eddy
⇉ Handshift:Jessie C. H. Gorham* others had greatly liked my tiny memoranda
attached, to save hunting throughAs Written:thro' letters for comparison. She evidently did not. Yet in absence of such
explanations she asked Laura what I
meant, only to hear: "I don't know, Mother! I think she doesn't know herself!" This,
Laura personally admitted to me, after I had explained to her comprehensively enough
for
a child in the 1st 6 months of Grammar to understand fully.
A tyroEditorial Note: A "tyro" is a person who is a beginner in learning
an art, trade, or other activity. would understand when told, that ambiguous passages, if
cleared up by means of simple declarative sentences, would require punctuation wholly
different from that required if resort were made to one complex sentence demanding
colon
or semicolons, etc; that the punctuation in such cases must necessarily wait upon
the
author's final choice of construction — which was why I
frankly admitted at the outset, my unwillingness to attempt such a task
without a stipulated final page-proof reading with
the author; and said tyro should be able to repeat the fact
three hours later comprehensively, without any "I don't know, Mother." to it. –
G.
